All Comments on 'Losing It At The Pool Ch. 01'

by heyjay1983

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Good for a first story.

Don't give up. You will get better.

joelafayettejoelafayetteabout 11 years ago
not so bad

Keep writing. You lost me at "my dick dwarfed her" this time.

ErotonautErotonautabout 11 years ago
Lucky fellow

Talk about being thrown in at the deep end.

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