All Comments on 'Lot in Life Ch. 01'

But, when one takes into consideration the caveat at the start of this piece, a very well-written and fascinating tale.

I look forward to reading more of this fantasy; thank you for sharing it with us.

Five stars, as much for honesty as anything else!

I really appreciate having constructive feedback. Thank you.

I set this as a challenge to myself, as I primarily write only exhibitionist/voyeur/fun willing participant sorta stuff. I found it quite difficult, as this is very far from any associations I have with sex/nudity, and from my own beliefs about cruelty like this. The next chapter is much less depressing and inhumane (to me), though the situation remains the same.

nayked <3

It's some heavy stuff, but I kinda like it. I know this is selfish but I would appreciate it if the boy wasn't included too much (or not at all) in future episodes. That's just a suggestion though, do your thing and don't listen too much to me.

Loving this, really well-written stuff. I am really looking forward to the next chapter!

I really admire your writing. looking for a follow up on this.one.

This is an extreme story