All Comments on 'Love Beyond All Bounds Ch. 02'

you have some interesting kink going on here. can't wait for the next chapter.

I am a big follower of BDSM, but it really takes a lot of skill as writer to cook a perfect story... I really enjoyed it please keep writing , you have what it takes

I love this new couple. They are so cute together in a way. Danielle is sweet and innocent and vulnerable. She needs a dom to take care of her, and she is getting it. :)

the touch she needs. She has given herself to one that appreciates her

Your work needs proofreading and editing, words are missing and there are grammatical errors.

Gym52 ~ I have to agree with you. In my defense, this was one of my earlier works before I learned the value of proofreaders and ace editors.

Take care,

James aka FinalStand

This is a really good story, so nuanced.

I have read a couple of your stories and haven’t been disappointed yet.

Scores 5/5

Extremely well written story. Plot and subplots are logically developed and intertwined. Characters are continuing to be developed indepth. To the best of my knowledge, this is the first story of yours I have read, I hope your additional stories are as well constructed.