All Comments on 'Love Bites Ch. 04'

To short for such a good story please make longer chapters or post faster.

This was a good story when i read the first chapter. I had to go back and reread them all but i still like it a lot. This last chapter could have used a bit more polish. but i love the ending. thank you for sharing Mechmanas

I had to read the whole thing all over again so I could remember what was going on. I liked it but was a little disappointed that it was so short. I look forward to the next part

It is a great story. I think it is a bit too short of a chapter. I don't know how long it was in between posts, but I would consider submitting a little later and making it a longer chapter. I would rather wait for a new chapter than get one and get so little to go on. Especially when the story is good...I want to see what happens with josh and andrey then. I like alecs parents, esp. the warmth of them which doesn't go with vampire usually. I like how her lion that she doesn't sense is felt by her brother and his lion. Lots of good elements. Just play them out farther.