All Comments on 'Love Bites Ch. 05'

i love this, keep the chapters coming but try to make em longer

More soon.and longer chapters

But you REALY need to make your chapters longer even if you take longer to post them. We just get going and then slam into the end, it's not fun.

OK, so I see you must get the idea we all want longer.

This one was better than the last with that little extra length so just next time keep going. I like where you are taking it. It was easier for me b/c I found this when 5 chapters were out. But if I had read one or 2 and that was it, it would be hard to get it to capture my imagination. it would be a shame if it didn't since you have a good plot and write well. I still like the changes in perspective. But don't let the desire to change perspectives stop you from playing a scene out and letting us get to know the characters better.

I do think that Aleca should have said something to Andrey about why she didn't trust weres. That has to happen right away. I was glad you had him come back in after talking to nella.

Please let the characters develop more for us. Let us get to know more about them. You have a great story...go with it.

more please!!!

I really would recommend to to stick either to the abbrev. of the names or their whole names. Sometimes it is Dreya, then Andreya, Alexcsander is Sander???, after having tried to read this chapter without re-reading everything I was absolutely confused. Not good at all.