All Comments on 'Love Bites Ch. 07'

After all of this time? Longer, please.

I enjoyed the short story. I do have to say that in your world I would not want to be a young girl. Every young girl in your story has faced abuse of some type and for 40 years before someone got a clue? Dang.

Thats it? After all this time?!I bite!!!!!!!!!!

This was really short but I want to know how is it that this vampiress is well over 200 years old and was married for 40years and is still a virgin? Plus what is up with the name spellings it seems like every chapter the names are spelled differently. But it was a good effort.

If you don't like the story don't read it end of discussion.

Please write longer chapters too.

I have been waiting forever and this is it. I like the chapter but it is to short and a few months late. I am not a happy camper this is worst then a Dynasty end of season cliff hanger.

This was great but I want more, and soon! Also, If you don't have an editor already I'd be glad to do it for you, just send me a note or something. I don't know how you do messages on here! Good work on this whole storyline, I love Weres and Vamps!

Please continue writting!! I'm at the edge of my seat waiting, also can u make the chapters a little longer? Thank u!

This Page was much better than your earlier works,,,,it was interesting,,a little short,but sooooooooooooo much better,,keep up the good work...

A virgin vampire and was with a lycan for 40 years? Hard to believe