All Comments on 'Love Bites Ch. 10'

Im gad you got the spelling corrected with the names,it makes is so much nicer to read,,The page is good,but would really be nice if they were more than a 3 minute read,,,i know it looks long on word,but it takes alot to make more than one page on here......its coming together nicely,,,keep up the good work,,just more of it,lol,,,,thanks

I agree with other commentors on this chapter and the others. The name changes are so confusing, half the time I don't know who is saying or doing what. At the top you said it was a short chapter, but this isn't a chapter, it's more like an intro. I have to ask why bother putting it up at all? Why didn't you just add it to the next "chapter", maybe then it would be at least a full page and possibly two.