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by DarkAvenger49

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Please use an edito

You had a good story but it was jumpy and had spelling, grammar errors. Some help could smooth it out and make it a good read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Please use an editor

You had a good story but it was jumpy and had spelling, grammar errors. Some help could smooth it out and make it a good read.

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