All Comments on 'Love in Chains Ch. 04'

by Nephylim

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Deeper and Deeper

The foreshadowing is tantalizing. Poor Nye. I love how you gave Adam his own master. I'm still looking for scenery against which these characters can play out the drama. A moment in the bar. The reaction of the patrons. Time for Nye to be Nye and laugh and enjoy the evening rather than a summery of the night.

I'm loving this.

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