All Comments on 'Love Insane, The First'

Well-written, well-thought out, and highly expressive.

Thank you for sharing.

The transition from the first stage - teasing an older man as wirtten in the mail to her friend, to the second one (becoming a slut) was too abrupt, and unexplained till the end.

I like the plot line, and where this could go, but I do not appreciate the abuse/use mentality. In my opinion a submissive should be loved by their Dom. There is a fine line between the kind of "hurt" that can cause pleasure and the "Harm" that ruins people's lives, should be treated carefully..

This is the first story I've ever actually commented on. It's hot, and expressive and essentially fantastic. Great work. <3

i enjoy the older male,younger female relationship.this wasn't gross since it's 33 and 20.he was at a place in his life when he was looking for something more,and her submission is it.he read her well.she craves humilation,wants to be dominated,but needs to feel safe.he did fall for her,how did that other reader miss that.hopefully he won't abuse his power over her and lose her.

I think this is a great story and is very well writen. I can't wait to read the Second and Third. I hope they are as good as this one. Keep writing!

What a hot and vivid story! I totally digged it!