All Comments on 'Love Like Art'

It's a great start to this story but yet it feels unfinished even for a first chapter. So good luck in finishing it .

Very good start. Its a bit short but I'm intrigued by your protagonists so please update soon.

You have a wonderful beginning, though it seemed to end abruptly. Please continue soon.

too short and unfinished to be a story or even a chapter..

Otherwise it was well written..

I have to go with some of the previous comments. It's a nice start, a very nice start, but it left me wanting to look at the back of my computer monitor to figure out where page two was hidden. (And trust me, "teasing" and "suspense" only carry so far.)

Finish the story, make for longer chapters, look for logical ending points......

-- KK in Texas

I'm wondering is this the intro to a series of chapters or is this it? It's got a decent openning but I was confused at the end. I think the writer got the characters mixed up: If Kerri is the artist that he's complimenting then why is his sister "R" can't remember her name, the one blushing when it was previously written that she had walked away and left the other two characters alone? Hmmm, I'd like to read how the rest of the story developes.

I like where this story is going, update anytime soon?

why start something you're not going to finish!

It has a great start not alot of errors...It's not rushed and it's believable

Seems like this story won't be finish.

I've seen people take 2 years...3 ...4...6 There's one that even take 10 years yes! it's true.

Lame