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"When you covered yourself I realized that you felt that I was intruding on you and I was embarrassed for you and for me. When you dropped your hands and showed yourself to me, I wanted to possess you like I have never wanted to before. I wanted you in the most desperate way. If you had taken one step towards me or even held out your hand to me, I would have had you on that bed in a second. I don't think I could have controlled myself."
"If I had known that, I would have taken more than just one step," she laughed. "Ray, I still love you. I have never stopped loving you and what we had. I remember the best of our times and I regret the bad times but they have not reduced my love for you. In fact, I believe that as I grow and recover my love for you grows too."
Rising from her chair she stepped over to him and bending down, she kissed him on the forehead.
"I'm going to go up and get my clothes and go back to my hotel. I think that we should sleep on what we have and not force anything until we each are sure of where we are. OK?"
Kari was collecting her clothes and cosmetics when Ray walked into the bedroom. She acknowledge him with a smile and he watched silently as she slipped her feet into her sandals and picked her bag up off of the bed.
"I'll see you tomorrow," she said and leaning towards him offered her lips for a kiss.
They kissed with only their lips touching as if they were afraid that if their bodies made contact they would never make it out of the bedroom. Stepping aside, Ray let her go past him and he followed her down the steps.
"Goodnight," she said at the door and kissed him on the cheek before going down the sidewalk to her car.
Ray stood watching her SUV until it disappeared down the street.
- COMMENTS
Ruttweilerover 1 year agoYou write dialogue really well, both interior and exterior dialogue. You’re also really good with emotions, and understanding recovery.
Your plot is absolutely not out of bounds, and I can really imagine it truly happening with the right people.
You, of course, understand that a lot of the readers who denigrate your work are reacting negatively to the possibility of happiness. Many of them are miserable, and don’t want anyone else to be to feel better.
Anonymousabout 2 years agoI'm sorry you only good 4 stars for this one from me and in the bit disappointed.
The sheriff mauer the emotional trauma he experienced but literally if hes around but who literally if hes a rational sin he remained not allow him to behave the way hes depicted in the story.
His daughter's behavior is absolutely deplorable and insensitive.
If both the children have seen one of those videotapes I can assure everyone here that this story would not be taking the direction that it is. Furthermore the daughter's absolutely ridiculous she keeps shoving them together and rubbing their affair in their face by calling them love birds it's really terrible and I felt like slapping her silly.
I give her points for Her addiction rehabilitation efforts that took a lot of strength and is admirable. That she shall briefly tossed off her unknowing a knowing disbelief of the turmoil he went through and that she was surprised he went through counseling is incredible. How could you be a sensitive human being and not realized that sure destructive force of what she had leashed upon him?
You did a superb job of unfolding the emotional issues of this kind of disastrous relationship relationships however you've really crumpled your story in this last chapter and rather disappointed in you.
There might be a reconciliation down-the-line but a brief after gone 2 years return to home and everything is starting to be forgotten and forgiven is just not possible.
Please give your reader little more credit Than that. We're willing to flow with a little disbelief for a bit but you're really stretching it it beyond his limits. If you will read the section you'll see I think we're all talking about.
Anonymousover 3 years agoIt is like the Chinese water torture. All of these are awful. Hubby is a weak and spineless fool. Wifey is just a slut wanting to have it all and have everything even after the horrible things she’s done. Stupid and ridiculous
Anonymousalmost 4 years agoAnd I already want to blow my brains out
“Wimpy Cuck Shit” indeed
dyonysosalmost 9 years agoThe time in all of it happend was barely 4 months,of those four months the first she was a receptionist and nothing happend,two weeks in school so in fact she became addicted and changed her ways in barely two months,the coke addiction was just after two days in vegas,the timelapse is a bit short for all that happend and tells a lot of karens very weak and self destructing caracter
