All Comments on 'Love of Politics Ch. 07'

Hi Jackie....I think you have derailed. Not sure any of that is really believable. But the writing style is still good.

Good but I am really not sure where this story is going. So we swapped Maybe in this chapter. But Beth and Mark has cheated for years and cheating is still cheating. Plus all the lies Beth has told. And Now every thing seems to be great. I still feel that there is some trouble ahead,

This chapter I felt was the best so far. The sexual flirtings and touchings were fun to read, along with the bedroom antics each couple displayed. Write another chapter and have both couples swap and watch each other.

I decided to comment when the last chapter came, but this is so good that I just have to chime in. I don’t understand Anon’s comment about derailing! In my view you have managed to describe the frail line of tension that must exist under this scenario. I will just say – jolly well done Jackie.

I’m eagerly waiting for the next episode. I know where I would take it, but then I’m not you!

Keep up the splendid writing.

John

Your usual great writing and build up of tension and complexity have everybody guessing. Initially Beth in a weak moment had sex with Mark that gradually evolved into steady long running affair,with a little hot sex with husband Dave amd a ;ot of lying on Beth's part. Suddenly Phyl appeared a few chapters ago and she and Dave beome instant buddies,golf partners canoers etc. Now suddenly Phyl has taken on the role of very horny wife and confidant of Beth leading them all into nude bathing and continuing as David's buddy. It's not really clear exeactly how friendly Phyl and David are. I think Beth and Mark are a little confused about who's playing whom. Great plot development and suspense build up. Are they going to swap? or swing? or just orgy? You're really building to a climax. --nice going 60 year old George

This is another very well written chapter. After reading this chapter the direction you started to take in the last chapter is now evident. The build up has been slow but it has been steady. The emergence of David and Phyllis have helped to take some of focus off of Beth, who remains a very unlikable character. The dialogue and the interaction between the couples was very skillfully handled.

Odd how the bozo's like your story but then downgrade it because they can't fathom or handle adultery. Beth appears to be an enormously interesting and likable character, feeling her way on a path she has never anticipated. Oh, and yes we wanted a lezy scene in the shower, but understand that it didn't happen in this true story.

Careful, Kentuckyridgerunner took a crap in those woods.