All Comments on 'Love Play'

Your writing has a nice flow to it, very elegant you might say. I'm impressed!

I am drenched, absolutely soaked!

I liked the twist at the end.

Very Nice!! I really enjoyed reading this story!

~Honey

Masterly composed...erotically delivered...

It was certainly worth suspending disbelief during the woman's rather unlikely humiliation to reach the final twist.

Its rare to see a story so intellectually composed. Cheers!

Nothing unusual. Do you remember your very first substantial orgasm. Did you ever say "stop" how about "that feels good, don't stop". And a bunch of "OH's" "AU's" "UM's" I bet.