All Comments on 'Loving Silver Eyes Ch. 04'

That was messed up, now May is going to be afraid of him when she is going to really need him. Great plot so far!!

Loving this so much! you have a gift! go get yourself published!!!!!!

nice story...ready for more..yes i'm greedy, i love a good story.

You continue to tell a really good story. That this is your first story is even more impressive. You continue to advance the relationship between Ayden and Mayrira at a really nice pace while at the same time you continue to grown the rest of the story. You continue to add new characters and at the same time give us background on characters you have already given us. You continue.......hopefully with chapter 5

OMG PLEASE HURRY!!!!! I LOVED IT!!!!!