All Comments on 'Lt. Gordon's Transformation Ch. 09'

Thanks for keeping it going.

Very well done, i'm looking forward to more of this series.

In a previous chapter, you wrote something to the effect of: 'she through her hair back'. The correct form for the verb would be 'threw', as in throwing something, not 'through', as in passing through.

In this chapter, you wrote, "we got passed that". The correct verb form would be 'past', to make the sentence correct, (and emphasize the incorrect verb form), it should be written as, 'we got passed by that'.

Good story, though, thanks for your work..

You have given us a lovely erotic entry into the PG star-trek universe, good job! Also I want a Jamie or a Carol, lol.

Very good again.