All Comments on 'Lucy's First Submission Ch. 09'

I like your writing, but I feel like we're being cheated out of some of the best scenes. Your stories have gone more and more towards skipping the majority of the actual scenes in favor of just quick summaries that just aren't enough to satisfy. Your first chapters were full of descriptions and reactions of the actual sex and other events, and I miss those. You don't have to write everything out, but even just a more flushed out look of what happened during those 9+ hours would have made for some pretty great orgasms for me. The skimmed-over summaries just don't do it.