All Comments on 'Luke Takes a Wife Ch. 02'

a mystery of infinitesimal romance, IN SLOW MOTION, with exaggeratedly painted perfect faces? what silliness! <p>

is luke some god-like creature? lukes takes a wife, it is said. that's like: Zues is punishing you for being bad and whether you know of it, it don't matter. or, jesus is here and he is walking on water! <p>

i mean, come on, it's a little story! just say it: luke's an idiot and he has 4 small kids with a prostitute-minded woman and she ditched him and now he's in a desperate mode looking for a baby sitter and the 19 year-old girl is jst like luke's prostitute wife, imagining all kinds of cosmic romances but will end up doing little more than wipping luke and his prostitute wife's babies butts and coook for him day and night until she can't do it no longer and then she too will bail out on luke the loser. <p>

that's real life and it ain't no rosy flowers and fussy slow motion nonsense ---- why not just say that?

If you dont have nothing good to say, then dont say anything!!!!!! dont listen to all those haters!!! The story rocks and i cant wait for more!!!! LOVE IT

I liked the story, it's romance so ofcourse wont be describing the crappy realities...What i didnt like...the period between chapters and..the chapter was too short :p keep writing about this family, please :)

pls write more cos it finishes far too soon but i love it

what a story love the cliff hanger looking forward to reading the next one please write more loving it so far keep it up

I really love this story and cant find out the past of the characters and their past four years ago. Love how she interacts with the kids. Look forward to reading more and hope it is soon.

I read literotica every day and your story is one of the best I'ev read in a long time, looking forward to more of the same quality.

excellent story!! its one of the best i read in a looong time. please post more im dying to know what happends!

Interesting story so far--can't wait for next installment!:D

Beautifully written. Only a mistake or two here and there. Nothing is ever perfect. You have a knack for holding my attention without the erotic descriptions most writers use. The mystery of thier past and the hope of the future keep my attention and keeps me wanting more. I do hope you will continue, you are very good and a refreshing new talent.

Although the time between chapters is agonizing, I love the story. Oh, and the chapters are far too short! LOL But keep up the good work. Can't wait for the next chapter.

But still have problems with the grammer. You should take advantage of the editors offered here.

The story itself is very good. Don't pay attention to that idiot. It is a romance. A classic.

He is so clueless and selfish, plus he is the worst kind of stalker!