All Comments on 'Luke Takes a Wife Ch. 03'

by Kimmi_kis

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
great story

i like how you're going about it letting it build up and all nice method which just makes the story even better can't wait for the next one, one thing i'm really looking forward to is when Hannah tells Luke who she is and the reaction

nirvanakcobainnirvanakcobainover 16 years ago
Can it get any bette???

Awesome story it just keeps getting better and better cant wait for MORE!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
divorced from reality

"romantic", yeah, as some white-noise fantasy, but it is totally devoid of any basis in reality

sharonasharonaover 16 years ago
Really Like It!

You're doing a great job with this story and I can't wait to read the rest!!!

TricialenTricialenover 16 years ago
Really Good

I'm still having problems with the grammer. And the fact that Luke just hired her and he's all over her, with his kids there. But that's just me. Keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
You rock!

I love your story and everything about it, except that I can't get enough! Please write more and quick!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
hurry

I check the web site every morning before leaving for work (about 5am)and now my husband laughs "Who is going to teach your first period class if you're late?". Thank you for a very enjoyable story. Sex is fun but a good story keeps my attention much longer.

Duckey13Duckey13over 16 years ago
luv it

I love it cant wait for more hopefully its really soon

ScotlandloverScotlandloverabout 16 years ago
Great Story

Keep it up! This is a great story and I can't wait to read more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
STALKER

His selfish stalking is making what could be a nice love story a sham.

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