All Comments on 'Lusty Lyn's Early Years'

Whore gets early experience. BTW, the great Carolinadreamer is a Sandlapper from the lower Carolina.

Carolina D. nailed it. All narrative!

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Sorry Guy, I just couldn't quite get into this one. It seemed too much an account of "What I did for the summer" paper turned in by a high school student. I have to say that your writing mechanics were good, so far as I noticed, and even the story line has a lot going for it. I just had a problem with the presentation.

Let me add, it can't be all bad, since 'impo,' usually a very sharp critic didn't cut you up too bad.

Just an introduction to his wife....I hope this isn't another tale about an Ex-wife! Some writers don't understand that Ex-wife, no longer is a wife! For this one I also hope she didn't turn a drug addict: " they went to his place to smoke some dope" or "the first time she had ever made love while stoned" aren't very promising...