All Comments on 'Lyon's Den Ch. 05'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
You are very talented at capturing . . .

legitimate, passionate, honest, loving, sexuality. Please, I know the story is completed, but I need to tell you at this point that I will be so disappointed if you turn her into a whore, him into a cheating selfish asshole, and the whole story into a base promiscuous fuck fest. In fact, I will feel violated as a reader. Up to this point you have honored the virtues of love, honesty, compassion, sacrifice, and human decency. I hope you didn't fuck it up.

Anyway, thank you for the very touching and endearing story you have told so far! The sex is great. The romance is wonderful!

computermadcomputermadover 8 years ago
Accuracy

Just as a point of interest and accuracy. You do not use a corkscrew on a champagne bottle. The cork is designed to twist or lever out with your hands!

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