All Comments on 'Maeve's New Job Description Ch. 02'

by Wants2benaughty

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
yeah suck that cock

just before you bite it completely off. I'll bet that would cool his ardor for any further sex life

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Nothing original or clever

Just rape. What's interesting or erotic about it? No stars for absolute drivel.

Wants2benaughtyWants2benaughtyover 9 years agoAuthor
Thank yoi for your fredback

I appreciate your taking the time to write

kris10ekris10eabout 9 years ago
Short yet Sweet!!

Dont allow the negativity get to you. I see potential in this one. Keep it coming, she may have not thought about bitting off his cock, but im sure she wants to live long enough to actually escape. With two men in the room and one being an evil bastard I truly dont think it would work in her favor. You are on the right track, let just work on the length...lol. I enjoyed it, and thank you for sharing. Kisses

VWC10VWC10about 9 years ago
Good Start

Ignore some of the negative comments by "Anonymous". Clearly they don't have the balls to use their profile name. It is a story, a erotic story to many.

Looking forward to the next chapter...

Ken

Wants2benaughtyWants2benaughtyabout 9 years agoAuthor
Thank you both

For your supportive comments. This is going to be a.long series, I hope you enjoy the other chapters

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Wow!!!

You write so welll and you absolutely know how to get your readers. With appreciation, may I kindly ask if you could add sex toys, drama please? But even without it so far, you are fantastic! <3 Haters dont really hate you of theyee gonna take time to read every word of your story

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Worst writing ever

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