All Comments on 'Make Me Your Slave'

Well written. I like the care she takes with him. I am, however, sad about the 'cold fish wife' aspect of the story.

A fine, well-crafted story from a great writer. Thank you - five stars.

fantastic story well written.

What a well written story you have chosen to share with us readers. I loved the care and gentleness that his Mistress is using with Andy. Slowly she is introducing him to new sensations as he graciously submits to her desires thus far. Is this going to turn into a series?

Over way to soon

Leave and go home. Go into your garage get a pair of pliers and remove the cage - it's easy to do. NEVER go back to the bitch. What an incredibly poor story.

Feeling like a real dog outdoors is simply a manifestation of your intense urge to be knotted.

Rip that cage off - NOW!

Let any beast foul or fair enjoy the wonders of your wonderful body and totally empty mind!

I LOVED this story and it is one of my favorites. Loved your descriptions and would love to be your slave and pet.

Where is chapter two????

I think Andy found a really nice Mistress,he is a lucky Pet..I like the anal plug with tail..

A DIFFERENT APPROACH. I like the way you’ve constructed the story from the psychological side of a mistress/submissive relationship. In all such relationship in real life, and I speak as someone who has visited many mistresses some several times, the mistress does not take control the submissive gives her control. That’s a very important point to recognise.

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This story is more real life than 99% of the fantasies written for this site. Not that the majority of those fantasies are not very enjoyable to read.

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You were still around two years ago and hopefully still take an interest in this site. Although this story was written nine years ago I think many readers would like to read what happened next.

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Some stories are obviously stand alone. With this one a sequel would only enhance the original.