All Comments on 'Make You Feel Better'

I loved it! I enjoy how you tell a story, keep it simple and add lots of description! I must admit, my fingers were wandering...and I'm in a public library right now!

Just like divergirl, this got me wet ... but unlike her, I'm at home now so I let my fingers play freely!! This

story is very well written ... almost from a genuine female's perspective ... and it reminds me not only of

the way I was first introduced to the joys of sex with another woman, but it's also similar to how I lured

my sweetheart Chrissie to my bed!! Sybil

OK idea but the writing is pretty crude.

Your story seems so real and inviting drawing the reader into the arena of making love! I admire your ability to display the passion of your session into words that excites the reader..