All Comments on 'Malware Policy Discipline Ch. 01'

by beshakis999

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Aweesome

Please continue. The helplessness of her is like some little prey being played with.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Brutally boring

You go into WAY too much detail setting up this guy's plot. It's ostensibly a sex story, but three-quarters of it is dull set-up. Get to the point. Or if you're going to take that long to get to the sex, the sex better be spectacular.

gimmie_your_loadgimmie_your_loadabout 13 years ago
NOT Brutally Boring...

That guy is an idiot. A good plot setting makes the story work, especially for part 1 of a series. Future installments will allow you to skip a little more into and move right into the sex.

Wonderful story and all the detail leading in made it feel more real and belivable.

Damn the critics! Great story!

xoxo

Lucia

dirtyoldbimandirtyoldbimanover 2 years ago

typical, nothing special or unique. 11" cock, LOL

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