All Comments on 'Man Behind the Mask'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Is this Part 1?

It was kind of dumb. Well written, but dumb.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
WTF?

WTF?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
WTF

What was that?

DoctorWolfDoctorWolfabout 13 years ago
Good mystery

I liked it, thanks for writing.

Harryin VAHarryin VAabout 13 years ago
can I please

have the 5 minutes back I wasted reading this crap?

hansbwlhansbwlabout 13 years ago
Mystery

One thing for certain, it was not Jacques!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
I enjoyed it

And, Alice.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
What?

???????????

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Spell check strikes again

Don't you think it would be a little uncomfortable (not to mention unsexy) to wear a brazier?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Language

Boring story, (ma) chérie

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Unnecessarily Mysterious

Interesting story, but truly incomplete at this point.

Mystery and misdirection in stories are fine. But unless you plan a sequel, and then this story should be, "ch. 1," you left too many open plot holes: why did she want sex with a possible stranger so quickly as a 3 week bride, when she easily could have asked him a question to hear his voice? Why was the session so abruptly ended with a horn? Why the elaborate costumes for only a very few minutes? Why an armored car? etc.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
What was that?

??????????????????????????????????????????????????????

Rambling?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
She was wearing a 'brazier'?

No wonder she got hot and bothered.

Vulcan_in_OhioVulcan_in_Ohioabout 13 years ago
Not much to say about this

Incomplete is the grade I'd give -- duo starro.

ChagrinedChagrinedabout 13 years ago
Ahhhhhh!

The Salvador Dali of LE!

PrincessErinPrincessErinabout 13 years ago
More

A good story but really no ending.

EesomeBeastieEesomeBeastieabout 13 years ago
Too many unanswered questions

What happened at the end? Was it a police raid? And it felt like she gave in to lust far too easily for a recently married woman.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
good story!

maybe a bit questionable as to where the end is but i feel it all plays along with the mysterious theme

widowedidiotwidowedidiotabout 7 years ago
Loving Husband?

What is it with this men in this stories. Seems they´re not happy unless somebody else is getting in their wifeś. Also what about the women ? Don´t they know the word No!!? Or asking? before procedding? Hope you have something better than this.

26thNC26thNCover 2 years ago

If youse ain't sho then youse a ho.

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