All Comments on 'Manipulation Ch. 02'

The reader is certainly manipulated in wanting to read on. I really like the way the tension is building, the anticipation.

First off, after the first part, I was like ok, nothing special, but well written. I'll read the next part and see if it intrigues me. Well you got the hook in this fish. I am ready for part 3. I am glad it is more than your average hump hump story. Those twin bi-demons who gave you a "00" after one chapter should be ashamed of themselves. This story has soap qualities that make you want more. I can't wait to see where you are going with this. Great job thus far!

After reading this story and the comments, I agree that the author is keeping the readers ready for action. Too bad, because now that I know what the author is up to, I will not read anymore of theis series. I don't like to be used. A more gentle approach should and could have been used.