All Comments on 'Maragana Girl Ch. 23'

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john1946john1946about 14 years ago
As Usual

What a good seies. As usual, the story continues to take twists and make for most interesting reading. I look forward to each chapter that comes out.

catman71catman71about 14 years ago
MORE AND MORE INTERESTING

KEEP IT COMING IT JUST GETS BETTER

Rad'lRad'labout 14 years ago
Excellent twist

Very well done, not maudlin, not weepy. Good job!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Great story and chapter

Well, Tiffany is going to find out just how hard it will be when she arrives. The story line keeps getting better and better. The interaction with Kim and Tiffany in the bar was a great buildup to what is going to happen in the near future for both women.

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