All Comments on 'Margaritas and Masturbation'

The concept of the story is fabulous however you use the word "she" way too much. Consider using other words in front like: Quickly, she inserted two cubes inside or something like that. The she's are way too distracting. Once I got passed that it's a great idea.

Good Job!

If nothing else I love the title of your story.

I enjoyed this, it was cute and reasonably well written. Good luck in the contest!