All Comments on 'Marlene, Kate, and Francis Ch. 01'

You quit there. You get the reader going then quit. Please finish.

You sir are a tease, and I must say you're damn good at it! This is a really good start, can't wait for the next part.

Thanks for a very good first story, I hope they are all this good.

Too much converstation between the characters, not enough teasing. Too forward

Good, but could have been better. Can't wait for the next part. A lot was left undone, so I cannot give much of a score on this one.

Two young career women meet in business class and hatch a plan. Marlene is surprised to find Kate is a prostitute but quickly adjusts as they plan a rendezvous with Marlene's husband. Hot! Enjoyable Read!