by Johnadi
Really?! It was almost a good bit of fiction. But learn to write, study a little about homonyms, and get an editor.
to bad he cannot spell, and know the difference
between HERE, AND HEAR!!
Really enjoyed the story, and good luck in the contest. Yes there were a few spelling errors, but didn't detract from being an entertaining read. xx
This story made me go weak in the knees. I don't know how but, the plot was terrifying. Still, I liked it. Good Luck for contest.