All Comments on 'Mary's Challenge, Day 01'

by Jappio

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austin_voyaustin_voyalmost 12 years ago
Welcome back

It's been a while and your stories are all very good.

If you have something new, something different, then feel free to post it. With your track record, the second day will be as good as all of your previous work. And this new story? I'm looking forward to it, too.

shiannshiannalmost 12 years ago
naked

wow she did a great job i can just wonder how that muse be a turn on

Mr_OutdoorsMr_Outdoorsalmost 12 years ago
Welcome back

Superb,your stories never fail to hit the spot. Always a good read.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Ho Hum. Too tame for a 5 Star submission Jappio, in this view Reader's opinion. Rated a 4****+ however!

For a real 'exhibitionist' challenge; Why not blindfold Mary on a public beach, wearing only a 'postage stamp' monokini, to sunbathe 'fully naked' albeit genitally shaven. Once a huge mixed admiring crowd gathers, order her to remove 'de minimus' swim suits to masturbate well before midday, then swim around amongst non-nudists totally naked for the entire day. What a phenominal Buzz that would be, for all your readers involved! If that is not enough to earn a 5 star submission, Mary could walk the entire length of any public beach she likes completely naked, pausing only long enough for the odd masturbation break!

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