All Comments on 'Massage Mat Ch. 04'

Fucking fantastic story! There has to be another chapter in here surely!

My goodness, KatieAnn, where do your talents end, what a beautiful mind you have. Certainly, it must be like Heaven to make love with you, well that's my story, and I ain't changin a thing, ever!!!! teeheehee

All My Love, RigaTony <3

if it had been me I would have sat on her face while she was masturbating and tell her to come hard when she sucks my cunt.

I like how you toyed with breaking the fourth wall there. I liked the moment where Beth muses about being a character in an erotic novel.

It might be interesting to play with a character that knew she was in an erotic story, and moved and controlled the author somehow, maybe to guide her own story, or possibly to interact with the author directly in some sort of Twilight Zone way.

You must be something special at your "day job!" I can't believe it is menial; it must be something spectacular both in context and results. No one can write like this without having some serious(ly gifted) credentials. Thank you for sharing with us! I'm happy I stumbled across your entries. Wonderful!

But you have weaved such an interesting tale, I am glad I didn't.

Thanks Don

Your writing is excellent and you have my full attention and love well done xxxx

I am working to learn Tantra intentional intimacy and think that what you are writing (the eye gazing, the slow intentional build up to physical stimulation) is like what I'm learning about Tantra.

Whether it is or not, it is beautiful writing and highly believable characters! Thank you for your wonderful work!

As other commenters have mentioned, very much alludes to spiritual Tantric experiences. More importantly however is the underlying concept of polyamory which I believe is a far more evolved perspective that I wish was more prevalent in our culture. I have enjoyed immensely your writing efforts. Thank you so much for your generosity in sharing your writing. I assume, & hope , that in reality you are able to indulge in alternative relationships & enjoy the reality of a polyamorous lifestyle.

Truly remarkable story. Unfortunately, Lori's initial reaction is probably typical of the closed minded, uneducated masses when they find out about an incestuous relationship. They are not interested in how happy or contented the couple may be. They refuse to see how complete the lovers make each other. I was happy to read that Lori was truly accepting of Beth's love for her son. This probably the most logically developed incestuous love story I have read to-date.

Well, 4 in and I am hooked. I love the deeper development of your characters and not just one erotic session after another. I can't wait to read more, unfortunately I have had to take breaks along the way! Thank you for sharing your talent with us.