by Mistress_Belle_Morte
Not a bad start, my only criticism is that it was far too short not even half a page so I that regard I didn’t vote…
Those who are excited reading it
I cannot contain myself. I must respond to the last comment.
Her story was clearly labeled BDSM, yet you read and are offended. Do you troll the other genres, looking to be offended and then luxuriate in your moral indignation? I read to be entertained. I suggest you restrict your forays too story types that you find more to your taste.
OK about the story... I liked the tone. I was left wondering if there was more to the story. A little more sex and I would have given it a five. Sorry I read erotica for the obvious reasons. Shoot me.