All Comments on 'Masters of the Arches Ch. 17'

there nothing to this man ,he is to stupid ,not one choice he has made was the right

one ,you biuld him up as school and intelgent .and he makes stupid mistake ,now his choice is to fuck off the only poeple that trust him to be smarter then them .with him being from here and that stupid ,think darwin ,the stupid die,eaten or fall off cliffs

Please get a sub editor to fix your spelling mistakes. The spell checker function can only fix some errors. The story HAS to be read to identify the poor spelling and incorrect word choices. For example, games should read game, consciousness instead of conscience, other words have had the 's ' added incorrectly onto a word that is already a plural.

Please fix these issues because they detract from a good story, making it tedious to read.