by FINC
One of your best stories, FINC, and I've read most of them. LOVE the husband and wife both getting it in front of each other, sooo hot. I do wish you'd pay a bit more attention to word & punctuation editing, though. I would have rated this story a 5 if the spelling and lack of commas wasn't so distracting. Please do more stories with guys getting it up the ass!
I'm going to sound really wierd, but if the vegetable had a white inside, then it was a courgette, not a cucumber ...
It was really hot though :)
... it is ruined by terrible writing. You don't even know what a complete sentence is.