by FINC
... it is ruined by terrible writing. You don't even know what a complete sentence is.
I'm going to sound really wierd, but if the vegetable had a white inside, then it was a courgette, not a cucumber ...
It was really hot though :)
One of your best stories, FINC, and I've read most of them. LOVE the husband and wife both getting it in front of each other, sooo hot. I do wish you'd pay a bit more attention to word & punctuation editing, though. I would have rated this story a 5 if the spelling and lack of commas wasn't so distracting. Please do more stories with guys getting it up the ass!