by StoryTeller2002
A nice tease of a first chapter. Keep it up with succeeding chapters.
It's more of a turnon to read about the building of sexual excitement when a woman writes it, especially when she's as open about it as you are. I liked the way Courtney prepares herself by wearing only a revealing dress and a thong, while lying to convince herself that nothing's going to happen. The gradual buildup of the audacity of both Courtney and Tyler, after she comes in soaked to the skin and plasters herself against him, is interesting, especially as you portray the evenness of their race from a hug to mutual orgasms.
Very nicely written. I'll be anxious to read more chapters.