All Comments on 'Meeting Alison in Edinburgh'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
What a wonderful story

I just like the honesty of it - nothing wild or unbelievable, just a good passionate romantic story. Your writing style is excellent too.

lust_4_ulust_4_uover 16 years ago
great job!

I enjoyed this story very much! Well written, excellent descriptions - made me feel I was right there! Oh, how I wish I had been - very hot!

lust_4_u

Bridget69Bridget69over 16 years ago
Marvelous meeting.

Great story. The descriptions are at once romantic and graphic without bordering on vulgarity. It also presents a realistic situation of internet lovers and how it doesn't always work out in the end.

Girls_cum_firstGirls_cum_firstover 16 years ago
Cheating

Fab story. If you are going to cheat, do it properly just like you did. Good sensitive horny writing, we liked it so much we made love afterward.

Tom & Sue

outdooryoneoutdooryoneabout 8 years ago
A hot liaison....

As it should be! Well told and just like I would imagine...

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