by xPoisonx
in this assholes life--I'm sure that all the other little asshole are applauding it
And I'm sure only other assholes leave derogatory annonymous insults.
Just as I like it sometimes. Your writing is good, you obviously take care with it, like avoiding using 'nipples'; interesting! Still the occasional cliche creeps in, but you'll get better the more you write. And I agree with your comment about your first anon poster. I'm afraid such ignorant creeps are just a fact of life on Lit. Don't let them discourage you!