All Comments on 'Meeting Mistress Margot'

by Piper1984

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darklacedarklacealmost 10 years ago
A good first outing.

It's sweet and earnest. It's a little by-the-numbers, but good for a first story. Next time, i would recommend spending more time showing what the characters are like.

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