All Comments on 'Meeting Mitchell'

very well put into the words the feeling of chasing and having the forbidden fruit. the fruit is well worth if you don't disturb the marriage. if not your real experience, then i hope you have one soon!...."Good natured discussion had turned to joking, the joking to teasing, and that teasing had evolved into a yearning that could only be satisfied one way."

Great story. Hope to see more soon.

I am Jen (married mother of one and accountant by profession). I could totally relate to your story or should I say it projects how my future will unfold. I have recently started flirting with a dentist and oh my....it is thrilling and I love the feeling of being wanted and being alive. We haven't "done" it but as your protagonist stated "She could always reason her way into doing something that she wanted to do." Enjoy!

- Jen, TX

Congratulations on your first submission!

Well written. You conveyed the sentiment of pent up desire very well. Something that many here could relate to... :-) I look forward to your next chapter

An excellent story. I do hope you will keep writing.

Well written, builds to a wonderful ending. Good development of the characters and their situation. Hope you'll write more.

Good little piece. You must have experience in this area.

I did not look at your profile to know your gender but the woman seems pretty close to spot on accurate. As a guy that is the male perspective of course. Married women I've been enjoying prefer the long build up of chatting to any quick sexual contact.

that this story has some truth to it...

Very nice first meeting. Ever thought about more of this?

Very nice work. Good buildup with the drive and the nervous tension buildup. I liked this a lot