by leanne2k
This was a stupid story all around. You get a 25 at least for trying.
My pussy is so wet now. I laid here naked on the bed and had my boyfriend read the story to me. he got hard from reading about these lesbians, so maybe now he'll let me bring one into our sex life. I hope so because i would love to let another woman suck and fuck me! Im typing this quickly because my boyfriend is ready to fuck me hard with his 8 inch dick. He's fingering me right not while I sit here typng this.
You need to get inside the head of a woman if you intend to write like one and, more importantly, act like on. No one can doubt women might feel attracted to another woman. That is common knowledge. But taking the lesbian plunge is a HUGE step, one very seldom done within the time frame of your story. Stick to something you know about when you write. And lesbianism and female sexual chemistry isn't one of them.