by shapeshifter37
Nicely paced. Realistic scenerio. Good writing. I look forward to future chapters.
Good beginning... but the ending took about 5 minutes to write... a real let down...
Melissa needs to get fucked, too. Perhaps you can start two families here with two "mommies", and keep one of them pregnant most of the time, with some baby girls being born in the future to also fuck when they begin "wearing the rag". A very good story plot!
in later chapters, this turns into a unrealistic cuckold story.