All Comments on 'Melody's Day At The Office'

sorry, but this was poorly written with a badly executed plot.

-sarah

Fantasy is one thing, but this is totally unbelievable, devoid of any intimacy and pretty much a waste of space.

There was potential to the story line but it was poorly written and didn't flow well.

If it's been up my arse and is covered with crap, it does not get fed to kitty - ok? That's a fine way to spread some very nasty infections.

This was hot. It was fast and short, but nonetheless, fulfilling.