All Comments on 'Merging'

by Ashson

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JBEdwardsJBEdwardsabout 1 year ago

It's hard to believe a girl could be that innocent. She has a period no doubt and also no doubt has wondered why. Her mother, aunt, grandmother, neighbor, even father, someone had to have explained the facts of life to her, in which case she would know about sex and pregnancy, and therefore be a little reluctant -- unless, of course, she is on birth control and it was all an act, to get some gratuitous sex from a stranger never to be seen again. It might have been fun to reveal that to us, the readers, after the narrator had moved along. Despite those comments I enjoyed the story and look forward to the next time I merge. 5*~~JB

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Essentially this is rape. If a person does not understand what sex is they can not consent to it. Sex without consent is rape. Such behaviour is deplorable and he should be punished.

Omart57Omart57about 1 year ago

Well done, Ashson! Great story!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Almost every male has had a fantasy of an encounter with a young waif, naivé but curious & easily coerced into sex play.

Reality is FAR from this piece of fiction unfortunately.

Cal59Cal59about 1 year ago

Was it a drop bear?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

This should be titled Raped by a Sex Predator and be categorized in Non-consent. There's nothing enjoyable here. 1*.

xhimexhime12 months ago

This was not rape in the Story, the girl didn't obige and was an adult... just very naive, but she learned something for life in my opinion. If this happened to me, i would not call it rape

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