All Comments on 'Michael's Journey Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Very erotic femdom

This story is very erotic and well written. I hope the author will continue his characters. They deserve to live on!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Woo Hoo

Oh I loved this instalment..... worth the wait

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
feedback

Would love to read more of this

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
breathtaking

you MUST continue this amazing story, fantastic writing, amazing scenes, great characters, this story has it all please continue this work of art

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

Yes, please continue with this story line. Excellent start.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
CONGRATULATIONS!

Excellent story! Good writing, descriptions, characters, tempo. Yes, do please continue. Mistress Sheila and her friends are certainly overwhelmingly powerful and irresistible. I would love Michael's enslavement to progress much further, much deeper. May I suggest far more orgasm control/denial for him, including a chastity device? Love the concept of him remaining beneath all other slaves, especially female ones! DEEP subservience. Incorporate also rubber bondage, rubber maid training, butt plugs? Never too many boots! Well done! from bootslavewilliam

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Nothing erotic about this, just sadism.

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