by justgeena
Good premise, but when characters are a bit flat & action is nill . Enough said. Hope this story galvanizes on one level or amother', next installment.
Way too little background and general information in this mess. It made for cardboard characters that acted without rhyme or reason. Just plain awful.
This is an interesting approach, with many possibilities. It is intriguing.
Not sure I agree with the comments below about flat or cardboard characters, I liked the story and am hooked waiting for the next installment. That church definitely seems off. That members only service was probably a huge orgy or something he plans on slowly pulling her into.
We see what the protagonist gets out of her affairs, but what does her husband get out of this lifestyle? Doesn't sound like he gets anything. Is he an idiot?
To the question of what does the cuck/pimp get out of it. Well he gets to be called dad, gets to spend her whore money, gets to sit home alone at least 3 days a month with no idea what his whore wife is doing across the country. After the good stories posted this week this is a real let down.
This story was great - I look forward to seeing their relationship evolve.
You have your critics, I won't join them. This story is different, perhaps unique. I will look forward to its development.
Frankly, I don't care about her husband.
Thanks Don