All Comments on 'Middle Age Sugar Baby Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

Do everybody a favor and don't have a Chapter Two.

LordSlamdawggLordSlamdawggabout 10 years ago
too short to rate as good or bad -

Good premise, but when characters are a bit flat & action is nill . Enough said. Hope this story galvanizes on one level or amother', next installment.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Stupidity runs amok

Way too little background and general information in this mess. It made for cardboard characters that acted without rhyme or reason. Just plain awful.

t_i_n_at_i_n_aabout 10 years ago
inventive

This is an interesting approach, with many possibilities. It is intriguing.

Wicketklown001Wicketklown001about 10 years ago

Not sure I agree with the comments below about flat or cardboard characters, I liked the story and am hooked waiting for the next installment. That church definitely seems off. That members only service was probably a huge orgy or something he plans on slowly pulling her into.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Quid quo pro?

We see what the protagonist gets out of her affairs, but what does her husband get out of this lifestyle? Doesn't sound like he gets anything. Is he an idiot?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
My 2 Cents

To the question of what does the cuck/pimp get out of it. Well he gets to be called dad, gets to spend her whore money, gets to sit home alone at least 3 days a month with no idea what his whore wife is doing across the country. After the good stories posted this week this is a real let down.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
My 2 cents is wrong

This story was great - I look forward to seeing their relationship evolve.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
I am hoping that the next chapter will not be a month away.

You have your critics, I won't join them. This story is different, perhaps unique. I will look forward to its development.

Frankly, I don't care about her husband.

Thanks Don

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
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Needs more ass fucking ASAP!

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