All Comments on 'Mina'

I can't wait to find out what happens next.

Wow, just wow. It has me so intrigued. Please write a chapter every day. Please, please, please, please, please.

Now how did she get pregnant?! OMG!!! How are they gonna rise a child? Are you kidding me? He is going nowhere in his life and hers just started but they should still keep the baby! At least thet have his mom for help with this whole thing. Totally loved this!! Can't wait for the next installment!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This isn't along the lines of your usual work...still trying to figure out what that means.

... a real story with a plot!

Let's see more!

I'm really enjoying this. I hope you keep writing - soon!

Will there be more?

I would love to see an update for the future as well. The building up is good. Will you update?

I love your stories alot. There should be more black woman and white man stories in this category because there simply aren't enough. I honestly love interacially dating adn think everyone should try it at least once. Anyway, great story...

a bloody reject. For a very smart girl she is very dumb. The boyfriend is trash as is his entire family. Now she's preggars. Way to go. Hope her mom kills her.

Love it! It's a real story-- no just some of the stereotypical trash that's usually posted here. Kudos!

I was so hoping that she would not get pregnant. Damn! Damn! Damn! What the hell they going to do? Mina has been a good girl all this time. I think it was that last time they were upstairs and he was high and she asked him for it harder. I think my heart sunk more then Mina's when she said it was blue.

DAMN!!!

Good story loving it.

Good starting point...

The story has started well, but, I have to say...in so many of these "love" stories an accidental pregnancy is central to the plot that it could almost be made a requirement. However, the writing is good enough that despite the cliche' plot device I gave it 5 stars.

While pregnancy may seem the overdone 'glitch' to the high-school sweethearts story, think about just how true to life it is and just how very, very very, often it happens. It happened with my mother and father, and countless other friends and family members that I know of. So, I don't know. That said, I think the interesting dynamic is the difference in their...well, I won't say intellect, because formal schooling doesn't necessarily dictate this, but let's say the difference in their academic goals. Also, there is definitely a difference in their lifestyles overall, being that he smokes and sells weed. So, while a baby, the biggest responsibility you can have, is definitely an issue, they already have some major issues to deal with for which resolutions may be more pressing than a pregnancy. After all, the child will be affected by these issues as well.

In only a few words you have made your characters with their strengths and weaknesses come alive. The mismatch of characters adds an extra dimension to the story. The plot seems clear, but I'm expecting some twists and turns. The dialogue and body language is unusual in a short story such as this. The ending of this part of the story is very good. The lack of a meaningful sex scene is my only objection.