All Comments on 'Mind Over Management Ch. 02'

.....4 stars, something in the intervening time continues to trouble me.

There's no attempt to uncover what brought about this momentous change. The character never really shows any curiosity about it, just dives in to a mega-fuck lifestyle and alters his world without a second thought.

That dog won't hunt for long...you need to address this at some point, orthis storyline will become a juvenile stroke fest, our protagonist reduced to a high school graduate that has never outgrown his junior year fantasies.

It's an interesting and deserving storyline. Don't relegate it to the realm of bottom-dwellers, when you could add so much adventure and intrigue as he goes about finding out what all he can (and also what he'd best not) do his curiosity finally getting the better of him and going off in search of an answer to how this power descended upon him.

However, Jack is at least partly distracted by the massive change of his way of life, as he adjusts to becoming the master of four very loving sluts who adore him. Bear in mind that he is curious as to how it happened, as who wouldn't be, but like any person who now has power, it can be intoxicating for him, and to be even more candid, it's not just about sex, he's falling for the girls, especially Jen. Her attitude has changed for the better and he is responding to her passion. He also has a very new job as one of the supervisors at the store, which won't be the extent of his advancement, of course.

Not that there will be any talk of fidelity or monogamy. Marriage, yes, but not monogamy. Jack's gonna be one hell of a busy guy. He also has discussed why he has this power with at least Jen, if not the others, as you recall when she presents her theory, which is only partly accurate. For now, it makes sense to him, but as he discovers that there are no exceptions, no people who are free from his persuasion, no one able to defy him, he will no doubt begin to understand his powers and destiny better. Then things will really begin to take off, I think. Right now, he's still half-expecting to run into people like himself or people free from his dominance. He doesn't yet know that he is unique.

Still, it's good to hear some honest feedback, though I wish that it wasn't anonymous.